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acrylic on canvas
i love these
and so there will be more of them soon ^^ and i will hang them up in row to prettify my flatlet
acrylic on canvas
i love these
and so there will be more of them soon ^^ and i will hang them up in row to prettify my flatlet
Image size
1575x1272px 782.11 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon DIGITAL IXUS 60
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
12 mm
Date Taken
May 15, 2008, 10:36:33 PM
© 2008 - 2024 MarieSaalfrank
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I'll be honest, I don't have very much to say in the way of critique. I think you balanced out the light and depth in this piece beautifully.
I find the shading on the individual strands (vines?) to be exemplary; they break the monotony by adding contrast to the darker parts creating the aforementioned illusion of depth.
I don't know if I'm entirely thrilled with the light green vertical lines from the top of the piece; though that's more a matter of taste. I don't necessarily think they should be any darker, but perhaps an experiment with lighter yellow lines alongside them may make it pop, but again, it's just taste.
All in all is a very nice piece in composition and technique, and I think it's gorgeous as is.
critique courtesy of *devCRIT